Has potential, just needs a bit more fine tuning..
To be honnest,
i'm sure you've put a lot of work into this, but there was just to many things I didn't really like.
Starting with the music: I'm not really into rap, but you can't help that, can you now?
So i won't waste anyones time whining about the music.
Not will i tell that i was shocked by the mesage this game had.
I really don't care about those,
so why didn't I like it then?
For starters, you didn't really know what to do...
And you can leave an area without having to kill everyone (the red hand stays there for ever).
Even so, there was no challenge, nobody tried to shoot back or even throw a book in the general direction of my head.
Quite unrealistic.
And finaly: it had no story.
So in conclusion: nicely made game, decent graphics, but the story and gameplay were too poor to cut it.
I hope you will take this critisism the right way and make an even better flash out of this one...
It has really great potential, don't let that go to waste